pretty goood, heres some tips
intresting story, I think I have to take a step back and watch the others to catch up, and the way it's constructed if really good too, I laughed my ass off at the comersl break thing, it was great just like a real episode from tv, very vreative and tasefully done i might add, I actually might become a fan, you music suited youer sceans well and your use of camera was good too. the only thing I need to point out is be careful with your sprites, they work well with and you make them work well, that ias a good thing, but I think you need to take a week off and tweak them to absolutly perfect their out look, and if you have a good stock Ithink you'll find it much easier to animate and it'll have a nice polished and professionall look after your done. also wathc your lip sync, my teache would tear me apart for it being off, but yours is ok for now, nut you just might want to think of taking it up a notch, and one last thing your voices are working great with this, did you and your firends do all the voice? cause the quality is very good and quite solid.
anyway lol, long review huh, probably get voted as useliss :P but good work, just be ready to take it up a notch next time and you'll easily get a 10 from me