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Markers

Not many use markers on here. So I'm pretty pleased that you did.
Your coloring is pretty well done. Good blending, lots of color choices, highlights, the works. But I do notice a lack of shadows though. You should get some in there.

The anatomy for most is pretty good. Some enlarged heads is a bit bothersome, but that seems to be of the style rather than an artist flaw. The hands are a bit different story. That red heads hands in the front could use some work and the blue haired girls wrist seems a little pointy. The girls in the back are too far off for it to really matter though.

Anyway this is a solid piece, congrats
8/10

Deadboy01 responds:

Thanks for looking. The heads are just a style I've accidentally developed over time because I've never cared to correct myself. And I was having a lazy day with the hands (but when do I not have a lazy day with hands?)

Hopefully I'll be able to continue with markers but it gets expensive :(

Random sticks.....

I'm really not liking this. Nothing has any sort of form.

You should actually try and draw something rather than just put up random doodles.

0/10

Fxcky responds:

"Art is the product or process of deliberately arranging items in a way that influences and affects one or more of the senses, emotions, and intellect"

I believe we deliberately arranged items using MS Paint in a way that affected one or more of our senses, emotions and intellect, so then i do believe that is called art my friend.

Meh

I'm not a real big fan of sponge bob, never have been either. Guess I never really saw the appeal.

I know that this is biased off a character that Sponge Bob drew though.

Over all I would say it was sort of ok. Its lacking a lot though.

I know you can do better.
3/10

Lepy responds:

Thanks you.

At Least Use The Circle Tool

Even For MS Paint, Come on man. Have some dignity for yourself.
This looks half hearted at most. I would advise redoing the entire things and at least use some of the tools provided in at least MS Paint to make this thing remotely better.
0/10

T2KRiot responds:

Wow someone actually looked at this??

Good and Fun

One thing that works for this is the characters are in Character.

The gang chasing Jimmy just seems like the right thing to be doing and it makes you wonder "What did he do this time?"

The cartoon style of art fits very well with the characters and the setting they are suppose to be from. It has both a simplicity and a sense of complexity all at the same time. I think you have done a good job rendering the characters.

I would have liked to see some ground shadows to go along with them as they were running. And perhaps maybe some burnt marks or something on jimmy and/or on the other characters to kind of show that one of his experiments went haywire.

Great Job
4/5
9/10

GinnyN responds:

Thank you very very much ^^!

Giant Girl?

The atmosphere of this is pretty good and the balance is alright. The color work looks good too.

My beef with this is mostly the placement of the character to the rest of the world.
You should have her lower on the canvas and a bit larger to give the impression of her setting close to the viewer.
At the moment she looks like she is a giant girl setting on a ruin rather than a just a normal girl setting on a small pillar.

You could have also gotten a little more dramatic with the clouds in the sky.

7/10

ArticWolf811 responds:

i agree with the placement i actually caught tht when i was drawing it but it was alread half way done and erasing tht wuldve totally messed everything else but tht is the 1 thing tht bothers me as well.......but as for the clouds im still gettin used to the program i use to edit my drawings so i rlly wuldnt hav any clue how to do tht but thanks for the advice

Glub-Glub

This one I am liking.

Although Gradients usually foul up a picture, it this one they work.

I would have liked to see some more shading done on Scuba-Steve himself. And perhaps a little more detail here and their on him. Also some detail to some of the suckers on the tentacles and perhaps some good strong and solid highlights on the tentacles as well.

This has got to be one of your stronger pieces. would call this one scout worthy.
7/10

MajesticBob responds:

I love that out of all the ones you reviewed, the "just for fun" pic is the one you like best. It does have a strange simplicity to it. When I'm not ass- lazy I'll go through and edit these pics. Make 'em better than they are now.

Better Than your First Submission.

Looking at this, I already know the differences.

Mostly what you need at this point is practice. Some anatomy sketches would be a big help. I would really like to see some life drawing and studies posted up.

As for some of the bigger flaws with this is the arms/shoulders and that Axe. The shoulders need to be closer in similarity when it comes to muscle mass. Also the arms are two different thicknesses. The characters left arm seems puny, complete with a small hand as well. Then the right looks like it has some power packing behind it. Although that could come from that Huge Axe.
I'm all for the fun giant weapons, but this at least needs a practical hand size grip. Lets also get this entire thing on screen, widen the canvas some more and get the axe more over the head. Have it really show off the power of the character.

The background is a little bland and could use a little more character placement. You should get the entire character on the canvas rather than having part of him running off the edge. Also having that full body on their gives you a chance to play with the characters surroundings more. Have some magic flowing, tearing at the ground, and lighting his surroundings.

The Characters face needs some tweaking and I think you could have more folds on those baggy cloths. You could also get much stronger shadows to really add some depth to the picture.

This definitely shows some progress.,
6/10

MajesticBob responds:

I agree. Though That is how the weapon looks and is in Real life! Lol! It's a damn train wreck of a weapon.

Kind Of OK...

Over all, this kind of makes me shrug a little and say "Meh."
The joke is dull and somewhat lacking a solid punchline. The art is barely on par and just kind of an overall let down. Even for a minimalist comic, this is lacking a lot.

On the technical aspects, your line work doesn't show any weight. The panels don't line up with one another. The entire thing lacks shading and the pixel thing just hurts. And characters seem like they are floating and are never standing on the same plane with each other.

The only thing this does really have going for it is the Megaman and Castlevania aspect. But even with those, the Twilight joke is still very weak and could have been worked in much better. I'm also sure that being a major time gap between Twilight and Megaman debuts doesn't help when you are trying to say that Dr. Wiley is a Twilight fanatic.

Better luck next time
0/5
2/10

ThirdOfClubs responds:

Lol, dude you're not telling me anything I don't already know.
I have a message on my page telling everyone that these are poorly drawn comics with dorky jokes in them. They aren't supposed to be anything special.

I just do it to kill time. XD

As for time gaps, given the amount of time between the creation of Quick Man and Shade Man, Quick Man would have already been destroyed years before.

Solid as Usual

Although I doubt that there are many stock photos of people falling from the sky.
Over all this is a solid design, and I like it.
The only two problems I have is that the skirt at the top makes her hips look bigger than they are, I think you could do some more flutter with it to define it more.
And The calf when it comes to the ankles make them look like cankles. If you could thin them out a little sooner, I think it would look much better.

5/5
9/10

PixelCake responds:

Well I drew her chubbier than I usually draw my ladies so the wider hips is normal and so are the thicker thighs, I tried to shrink the ankles and it looked like they were going to snap her feet off
eventually I'll get it right XD thank you

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