Kinsei's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Draculina]

I'm Liking This

yes, yes, it's going well. I can see improvement in your work.
very nice job.
I love the moon and it's glow. same with the jack-o-lantern.

As for a tip for improvement, Add a background and ground plane, after that use the glow from the moon to cast a mincing shadow from old Vampy there.
If you do go for a background, keep the colors simple and washed out, is ir will keep the focus on the old neck biter there.

[Castle Crashing the Apple]

Dude, Awesome Sauce!

Honestly, I'm surprised your not in to carving of some sort.

Funny

... damn I want a apple now,,,,

bigjonny13 responds:

Lol, well I wanted to carve something for halloween, and I found an apple. It's not the easiest material to work with, but I managed alright for the first time.

[Cold Reaction]

I like this

I really do,
but you have trouble seeing anything.
Some ambiance lite would be nice along with some back lighting.
if no one can actually see your work, how are they to praise you.
you can still have a mood setting picture like this but also still have everything seen

[Bobby Lee Jones]

Well I said I would

And true to my word, I will.

it seems like you used a a brush with the opactiy turned to about 75%. This gets mostly noticeable the arms where you seemed to go over the same place twice.
For the head it seems like one pass.

Perhaps some underlying sketching on another layer before laying down solid lines would be a best course of action for this

I feel hat there should also be more to the picture, perhaps some more character with actual clothing and a setting, just to tell us more about Mr Bobby Lee here.

I have seen much much worse here on NG and other places on the net.

With Bobby's expression I think you should have went ahead with Angry Fac, even if only to relate to the Angry Fac inside joke, but thats a personal opinion, not a professional one

SuparEFG responds:

Angreh faic might have been better.

[Mew mew]

Tell me

Where did you make this from?

Lunarfirekitty responds:

is made in photoshop CS3

[Trees revenge]

Wow

The only thing you didn't steal and it still looks like crap.

you deserve a severe punishment, for this.
lets hope they give you one.

[My Pokemans - Team Tastic]

yum

Looks like Golduck got him some breakfast.
lol great picture
makes me wish my game boy and pokemon games weren't stolen so I can play some more.
Good job, great color choices, solid composition.
very nice.
5/5
10/10
Faved

Sabtastic responds:

Hey, thanks! :)
lol I used to own a bunch of the games way back (which is why I picked mostly original pokemon) but I have no clue where they ended up! :C

[illustrated fulp is my hostage]

pull the trigger!

Do it do it do it do it.
lol j/k
please don't kill tom.....
lol I like this, it's simple and funny at the same time. I hope it does get FP, this is the kind of good solid humor that Newgrounds was meant for.
Perhaps a follow up pick is needed after this gets FP or now, lol

dommi-fresh responds:

i was gunna do one with stamper and tom doing a pulp fiction ref. with me dead on the floor so i might do it if this goes down well.
i would be suprised if it did get FP

[Under Junction]

I'm Liking This

. The model seems solid and the maps are good, but the lighting is what gets me. I know that the atmosphere of this thing is suppose to be dark, and it feels like it should be dark. But it's almost too dark.
Adjust your lighting. What good is nice 3D models and maps if you cannot see them.
You can still have the scene retain the creepy feeling and at the same time make it where every one can see it.

your specular on the map came out real nice. What program did you use?
5/5
9/10

SkillZombie responds:

I used 3ds max to create the general landscape, but I use photoshop to touch it up afterwards.