Kinsei's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Thing Thing Scene:Invasion Lab]

What!?

From what I can tell you have one character busting through a window and shooting another. OK, fine, but this is pretty boring.

You need to work on dynamics and physics.

The First Madness Character doesn't even look like jumped through the window.... or even jumping....

Look up some action scenes from movies and other animations and study them.

[Terrorist]

Bad

So Far this is one of the worse ones I have seen from your profile, and I have only seen 3 so far,

Anatomy Is shot. You really need to get a tutorial.

Composition isn't great and you have a lot of blank space floating about. I see some lines on the ground that I assume to be shadows, but its not enough.

Crop the white space, work on your design and line work and Composition. Your better off scrapping this and having a complete redo.

[Project 154]

Better Than The Last One I Reviewed

But Being Madness, it doesn't take much. Your design on this one is a bit better and more original.
You need to work on the design of the shoes and tune up your line work.

[Darkness Assassin]

Well....

So far it seems on the right track, but you really need to start correcting some issue.
One of the biggest issues is anatomy. Your torso isn't flowing like a muscled character and neither are your biceps.
You also have some proportional issues. The head is much too large and the torso to legs need a much better ratio.
Give a look in to some anatomy tutorials and exercises.

Moving away from those major issues, you also need to work on design. This entire thing is pretty bland.

Good luck with the rework.

[Christmas Card - Penguins]

Good

It is a pretty simple design over all. I think that adds a lot to the appeal.
Some simple coloring and shading is good too.
For a short and simple Christmas card, I think this will do nicely.

Are those Skates on there feet?
Gotta to hurt holding each other up.... sounds like a bloody accident waiting to happen.

aniforce responds:

Thanks for the review.
Yes those are skates... They are part of the mascottes and can't be taken off... It popped up in my mind as well...

[Sally Brown]

I like this...

I'm not sure what it is that I like, but I do like it.

Over all the simple color and lighting seem to work.
It's Kind of odd to have her off at the knees though, but on the other hand I tend to do that myself all the time.
You have captured the slight softness of the female form quite well.
I really like how the eyes are a different color . They really draw your attention.

[Bows 3]

The Green One

I'm Really Feeling the green one. It seems to have a cool earth or wind element feel to it.
Solid designing as usual.

[Killing In The Name Of.]

For Some Reason....

I keep thinking of the NG angry face. I'm not sure why, but I could see this as the angry god of emotioncons

Over all I do like it. I think you have done well with color, composition, and detail

Congrats

[Angel Familiar]

Well.... Made a fool of myself.....

didn't see that you had already put one up already today. So Opps, my bad... :P

Still great lighting and composition.
I'll continue to keep an eye on you.

[Colonial Fight Club]

Pretty Solid Again Simpson...

Great release. YOu should get around to posting more than one a day.

I do have one small beef, and it's not really about the art. The high resolution isn't really any higher. I would have loved to be able to click on it and get slapped by that beautiful high res image.

Still pretty cool though. I like your lighting. I've been practicing my lighting as well recently.
Good expression too,

gsimpson responds:

I've had problems before putting up high-rez work and people making/selling prints at Cons before. I don't mind people printing out stuff for themselves or making desktops from them, its just irksome getting a booth at a show and some group of kids is selling your prints a few tables down.