Ouch.
Out of all the pieces I have reviewed for you so far, this is the worse one. I don't count your experimental for reasons I mentioned in it's review.
The anatomy in this one is completely fractured. The head is way too big, the torso is way to small the upper arm is long enough, but then you have these tiny forearms along with even tinier hands. The neck looks like if she shifted her weight in any direction it would snap in two. You have this pointy chin and these large eyes that really throw off the facial structure. Adding a final insult to injury, you have this filter slapped on top that is suppose to look like something, but it doesn't look like anything other than a bad filter slapped on.
You really need to study some anatomy. Attend a life drawing class or get some books to help you out. You need to also need lean anatomical proportions. Even Anime characters have anatomy.
I hope you produce better work than this in the near future. since I will be looking forward to your progression