Kinsei's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Smokes]

Haha

The goofy feel of this is a nice touch.

You say you do these at work, so I assume that you work as a cook or in some sort of kitchen, but how do you get to do this and not get in any trouble?

7yay responds:

Thanks for the review and the scout!

I work in a hospital kitchen usually these end up placed at the salad bar to catch people's attention, and I have a very laid back boss who finds them amusing

[Baby]

Cool

What is this one made out of? It looks yummy.... er, not that I eat babies or anything,

7yay responds:

You've never tried baby? You're missing out my friend.

This one is made with a honeydew melon, grapes, a cherry tomato, kale, and a cabbage leaf
Thanks for the review!

[Extreme Peril]

It may look like crap,

but it doesn't break any rules. So its fine by me.

mechanicthehedgehog8 responds:

Thats it?No Points?

[Beer Flooder]

Awesome!

The color in this one is very much a win. I really enjoy it. I think that the pose is pretty sweet too. Although the arm reaching back is a little awkward, it still looks good.

Great job

ZaneZansorrow responds:

Thx Kin and ah dah Sei, looks like i gotta learn more about arm reaching back :D

[Beerfish]

Excellent Use Of The Icon

Nice Qb. I like how you incorporated the icon in to the entire piece.

J-qb responds:

that's the big advantage of making the thumnail isn't it?

[Figure in the Water]

Its alright...

The hovering face is ok, could use some proper toning as well as some highlights and shadows.
The line art could use some smoothing as well.

The Photo stock of the rippling water and the reflected face are what is hurting this most. You would have been better off drawing the ripples so they would flow better with the picture. If not doing line art for them you could have done it with simple colors.
As for the reflected face, it doesn't even match the hovering face. If you were truly striving for a distorted refection then you should have tried to match the faces more. Also you should have had the reflected face distort with the ripples as well. This again, goes back to what I mentioned a few lines up about drawing your own water ripples.

doppleganger responds:

Thanks for the Advice